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Akaira
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2019-02-19 05:14

A VERY SHORT REVIEW: Writing Quality - 4☆/5☆ The story is so far so good. There are some incorrect words and grammar mistakes here and there but nothing too drastically noticable or disturbing. Stability of Updating - 4☆/5☆ Honestly I don't have that much to say here yet since I just added this book and it only has few chapters at the moment. So for now I'll give it 4☆ Story Development - 5☆/5☆ I really love the way this story is going. I think that the path that the MC chose is rather interesting. I look forward for the future chapters. Character Design - 5☆/5☆ The point where I am now, all the characters introduced seemed dimensional enough. I love the MC. I think her way of thinking is pretty interesting. World Background - 5☆/5☆ Since there are still few chapters at the moment, there is not much world building yet. But I can pretty much imagine the world that she is in so I think that merits something. OVERALL - 4.6☆/5☆ This is a very good novel overall. If you like novels where the MC is in an era,whether she reincarnated or transmigrated, where nobility is a thing then you will like this novel. I really like the premise of the story. I hope that the author will post more chapters soon. Thank you author for such an amazing novel. Love it.

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