Review Detail of Dark_Xavy in The Ruined World (HIATUS)

ONE WORD ITS HORRIBLE!! Shame, even though apocalypse is my favorite genre, and the idea behind this story is interesting, it failed to deliver the idea in the story. GRAMMAR? HORRIBLE (LIKE REALLY HORRIBLE) SPELLINGS? QUESTIONABLE (I DONT KNOW HOW OLD THE AUTHOR IS, A CHILD PROBABLY?! 😂) And there's the MC, he is so stupid/idiot, a total lack of common sense, even though he attend at a Tech School (like really you attend a Tech School with that kind of dumb/idiotic mindset?) And author you really need to, edit your chapters, its horrible to look/read. And sorry if you feel offensive 😂, that's just how horrible it is to read your story, even though its interesting.✌✌