Review Detail of ChibiFireflies in The Ruined World (HIATUS)
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So, I read some chapters and I noticed some things. *take a deep breath before starting to type more... First, that is an awesome system -minus the terror, of course. But, the terror is what makes it exciting π so, yeah, I love it. Second, you might want to edit some paragraphs, and break it into some sentences. Instead of using comma [ , ] continuously, try to put period [ . ] in it. You might want to find someone to check on that for you. Third, love the story π yes π πππ I'm looking forward to seeing some progress and of course, I wish you the best. Keep working on it, good luck α(ββΈβΌβΆ)α ππ
The Ruined World (HIATUS)
Ihilani
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If you join the webnovel group on fb, there are some people there who volunteer to proofread ππ I can't say I'm good at editing, but if I can help you solve some of the problems. e-mail me if you want π chibifireflies@yahoo.com ππ
Ihilani:Thanks for the tips, I'll try to improve on those problems you said. Where could I find an editor?
If you join the webnovel group on fb, there are some people there who volunteer to proofread ππ I can't say I'm good at editing, but if I can help you solve some of the problems. e-mail me if you want π chibifireflies@yahoo.com ππ
Ihilani:Thanks for the tips, I'll try to improve on those problems you said. Where could I find an editor?
ChibiFireflies:If you join the webnovel group on fb, there are some people there who volunteer to proofread ππ I can't say I'm good at editing, but if I can help you solve some of the problems. e-mail me if you want π chibifireflies@yahoo.com ππ
I Read the synopsis and was not sure if this would be something I would like to read. I decided to take a look at the reviews and to my surprise some people gave you constructive criticism and seems to be good advice. the fact you listened and responded positively is hugely important many readers, I've added your novel to my list of must reads. :D