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foshoLv125yr
2019-03-10 06:18

I'm really enjoying this novel so far. Their are a few grammatical errors but they don't take away from the novel itself. I highly recommend this one

The Ruined World (HIATUS)

Ihilani
4.1
38 Chs

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Ihilani
IhilaniAuthor

Thanks for the review, I was writing without an editor at the beginning so I had some errors, but now I have a person helping me to review, although it is not 100% error proof, but it is improving. I am redoing the opening chapters as well to fix the grammatical errors.

5yr
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ChibiFireflies
ChibiFirefliesLv13

So, I read some chapters and I noticed some things. *take a deep breath before starting to type more... First, that is an awesome system -minus the terror, of course. But, the terror is what makes it exciting 😆 so, yeah, I love it. Second, you might want to edit some paragraphs, and break it into some sentences. Instead of using comma [ , ] continuously, try to put period [ . ] in it. You might want to find someone to check on that for you. Third, love the story 😍 yes 😍 😍😍😍 I'm looking forward to seeing some progress and of course, I wish you the best. Keep working on it, good luck ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ 😊😊

5yr

RoyalNexus
RoyalNexusLv13

This is a very good novel so far and i cant wait to see it evole in to something greater also i seen this under the kingdom building section or some random reason probably because it is fanasty but that would be cool to see later in the story (I'm givin it straight four atm)

5yr
Ihilani
IhilaniAuthor

So boy's, shameless author here, this is my first work, so i do not intend to abandon him and I will pay special attention to him, and I have a good story planned for this novel, I hope you like it, see you later.

5yr
ShadowFlamePhoenix
ShadowFlamePhoenixLv14

Start is good hope it continues to be good, deascent carector devolepment, I feel that the updates a bit slow. Pls make more content. Pls. Make more of it !!!!!!!!!!!!

5yr
Malladi
MalladiLv14

Narrative is good though it’s standard zombie apocalypse with a system thrown in. Worth continue reading and hope MC develops well. Overall I rate it just above four stars ⭐️. Good luck to the author.

5yr
Ellendria
EllendriaLv11

Nice. I'm totally going to dive in. The synopsis was intriguing. I'll be sticking to this for the long run. I love where this is going, and can't wait to see just how legendary and epic your characters actions get over time.

5yr
Webbwolf
WebbwolfLv5

the story so far is pretty good as the he pass has a fast feeling while the actual progress in strength of the characters improve from how they started you can clearly see how much the have to go through inner narrative of [ system ] shows. hopefully the quality says the same as the characters grows throughout the story . hopefully this last long

5yr
Nightmare_Taichou
Nightmare_TaichouLv4

First and foremost, this is the first system story I've read that's totally different. This isn't a case where the system tries to help out MC in becoming the best of the best. And with the terror involved, this is an exciting read. Writing quality - three stars. There are couple glitches here and there, a quick edit should fix that. Stability of Updates - I cannot comment on that since there are 26 chapters when I started. Story Development - 4 stars - the story is easy to follow, and not all over the place. Character design- 4 stars. World background -4 stars. Great job author!

5yr
yayasmim
yayasmimLv3

I'm enjoying the development of the story, it's really good and I hope it only improves in the next chapters hahaha  I'm looking forward to the next episodes where Matthew will start his adventure. I liked the character, it has good features .. I'm very curious about new characters and also to know more about Matthew! It's a good story. I really like it!

5yr
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