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LeYank
LeYankLv35yr
2019-09-29 09:25

Me gusta mucho, el contexto avanza de acuerdo con la historia original, solo que algunos personajes le falta más desarrollo entres si... La he leído al menos 3 veces hasta ahora, solo desearía que los capítulos durarán más y fueran más capítulos por dia

La Leyenda del Kyubi [Español]

GenoXX
4.7
279 Chs

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GenoXX
GenoXXAuthor

gracias por la crítica y concuerdo, siento que estoy dejando a muchos personajes fuera, gracias por dar una crítica constructiva, pero desde mi punto de vista, encuentro que les he dado más desarrollo que muchas otras historias. Me gustaría también que continuaras diciendo en que más puedo mejorar, tal vez así mis próximas historias sean mejores :)

5yr
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GenoXX
GenoXXAuthor

Bueno, aquí el autor... como todos los demás, le daré 5 estrellas a mi historia, aunque se que no es perfecta y puede que a muchos no les guste. Como ya se habrán dado cuenta, esta es una historia en español, Un pequeño rincón para aquellos que sepan español o que estén más acostumbrados a este idioma, es por eso que aquellos que puedan comprenderla, la disfruten lo mejor que puedan. Espero que su estadía en mi historia, sea agradable

5yr

Nicobox
NicoboxLv4

Aun no comienzo a leerlo pero me gustaría felicitar al autor por crear su historia en español ya que rara ves (o ninguna) se ven historias en español y también por que también soy de chile y me gusta ver que no soy un solitario en este camino de webnovel

5yr
Shen_byakko
Shen_byakkoLv5

una de mis novelas favoritas de webnovel esta novela cada capitulo me da mucha risa. se agradece que se todos los días publiques un capitulo y me encanta que este en español. espero que no abandones esta novela hasta terminarla

5yr
Dagda
DagdaLv11

otima fiction, fluent and friendly. a bit of humor and seriousness mixed together, make this exciting fiction. I recommend it, even at the cost of using a translator

6yr
Shen_byakko
Shen_byakkoLv5

excelente novela una de las mejores novelas fan-fiction de naruto mas capítulos por favor!!!!!!!!!!! mas capítulos por favor!!!!!!!!!!! mas capítulos por favor!!!!!!mas capítulos por favor!!!!

6yr
shadowfall
shadowfallLv6

Primero. que todo... es una novela en español... poco se encuentra en la plataforma... Segundo. El autor le da forma a su historia manteniendo los eventos pero cambiando su desarrollo.. sin mencionar que el punto de partida de la historia te deja buscando mas, ademas el autor a logrado explicar muchos de los eventos que este a creado de manera creativa y concisa desarrollando una personalidad unica para el mc. Y un desenvolvimiento de la historia que no parece para nada forzado.. Es una historia bastante recomendable

6yr
Dark19
Dark19Lv12

Una de las novelasmas entretenidas que e visto.El humor y la comedia que tiene me matan de la risa.Sakura talla más pequeña que AAA DE jaja.Me encantó seguí hací.

5yr
Shin0bu
Shin0buLv1

Pero mira esos títulos pappuuuu xd ( solo quería decir eso pero me obliga a escribir más :v, lo voy a poner relleno con espacio, Ha, Relleno xd)

5yr
Victor_Weismann
Victor_WeismannLv4

I loved your Fanfic I will pass on to my children when they grow up. Please keep up the good work. Please keep up the good work. Please keep up the good work. Please keep up the good work.

5yr
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