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SpaceTimeSovereign
SpaceTimeSovereignLv146yr
2019-02-25 05:32

So far so good. Only five chapters but definitely a good read so far. Keep it up author and if you could do 1 chapter a day (if you have the time of course) it would help a lot, also try to lengthen the chapters a little. They are on the shorter side, but otherwise it's seems pretty good to me

The Richest Dream Comes True

Obikun
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Obikun
ObikunAuthor

Thanks bro but I am having my mock exams these days. So please try to cooperate with me :)

6yr
SpaceTimeSovereign
SpaceTimeSovereignLv14

No problem. I'm not really well known on here like "Thestatsguy" but I do try to give realistic views and feedback and try not to bash authors who are new to writing but keep it up and keep writing. Oh and beware there are some people on here who give very crappy opinions just to get under your skin, so keep your head up and keep writing

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Obikun
ObikunAuthor

Haha thanks a lot. Your comment gave me more motivation to continue.

SpaceTimeSovereign:No problem. I'm not really well known on here like "Thestatsguy" but I do try to give realistic views and feedback and try not to bash authors who are new to writing but keep it up and keep writing. Oh and beware there are some people on here who give very crappy opinions just to get under your skin, so keep your head up and keep writing
6yr
SpaceTimeSovereign
SpaceTimeSovereignLv14

Glad to help and I'm looking forward to the new chapters

Obikun:Haha thanks a lot. Your comment gave me more motivation to continue.
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