I made it 11 chapters into this book but it’s so poorly written it’s hard to get into the story. The story itself seems like it’d be interesting but I can’t get past all the grammar mistakes and poor pharsing. I keep having to reread paragraphs and decipher what the author meant to say because the wording just doesn’t make sense. It is definitely a tough read and there’s not much description. I mean, none of the characters physical traits were even described in the beginning except that the half sister Marga looked like pretty, well trained socialite, besides that it’s basically just up to the reader to guess on every character, hair/skin/eye color or body build.
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