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Ruen
RuenLv56yr
2019-04-01 14:40

The amount of details makes it easy to follow the story. The world background seems interesting, and it is well set up for an epic journey. The main character is interesting, and I am looking forward to the introduction of new characters. I say keep going with the natural flow and write something that you enjoy, and people will start to like it as well when they see the work put behind it. The slow build up might turn people away at first, but it will pay off when the chapters pile up. The grammar is not bad for a first-time writer, but you need to work on complex sentence punctuations.

Within The Soul: Supremacy

DriftingCloud123
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PeachyPearl
PeachyPearlLv4

Another exciting novel found through a review swap. The world you created let my mind wander around on a really wonderful journey. I'm happy to have read it. Your writing style was understandable so it didn't hinder my imaginations. Your world that you wanted to create, I could imagine it through the details in your writing. Thank you for letting us read such an exciting novel. Keep it up author. Imma hungry af, I'm looking forward to read more.

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Titus17
Titus17Lv10

dont drop it i hope u continue it AND MAKE IT EPIC XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

5yr
Xylop
XylopLv11

Excellent work! I Definitely look forward to reading every new chapter. Great pace, characters and story. It's a joy to read a well written thought out novel that has its own unique story and unique progression.

5yr
Miss_Lazy
Miss_LazyLv5

this is interesting. The plot is great. The characters are interesting. the world background is great too. I'm going to dd this to my library. Keep it up

6yr
veinglory
veingloryLv4

I write my initial review at just three chapter, because if I don't like the book I stop before there and good writers need encouragement! The writing here is solid and the character has a firm backstory which I like. Too may stories start with a generic character rather than what feels like a real person with a personality. I am just getting to the bit where we see where he ends up. So I will update this review later.

6yr
midnight_bloom
midnight_bloomLv13

The plot is generally exciting, to start with the way you did it in chapter 1. The flow of story and character development is good, and even the description of the world background is very detailed. I'm trying to imagine how it looks like based on the description. I understand there's explanation/disclaimer on the synopsis about writing in English, but it is quite good as well, with only little errors here and there which are tolerable. Just be mindful also of the punctuation marks. Overall, it's really quite interesting and enjoyable. Keep it up!

6yr
Sapphirechelsea237
Sapphirechelsea237Lv4

It's great!!! I enjoyed reading it!!! And the English was not at all bad, it's perfectly understandable!!! Looking forward to the next chapters!!! Keep writing!!!

6yr
Knossos
KnossosLv4

Good ass book, what else can I say? Well the word limit says I can say more... In that case I will certainly take this moment to better my writing skills... Nevermind.

6yr
yunisao
yunisaoLv13

Reveal spoiler

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