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Melanthias
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2019-02-11 13:46

I feel like I'm doing ok but I still need to fully develop the background but my story can definitely develop My writing is average Mabey worse over all I just hope you guys enjoy it I'll keep it up as long as I can and continue the story may make it super long fun exiting at least I'll try

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Hope you all comment and review

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Just do your BEST!!!

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Thank you for your support it inspired me to type up my next chapter I have a good chunk done. I hope you don’t mine that my litch is name day after you I hope you like it

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