Well what to say. Bad grammar and stupid goody 2 shoes mc. Overall world building is not really here. Character development isnt really here as of chapter 30. Also the mc shows a lot of signs of being omegamale and developing into a puss.... or a stupid slave weeeelll... :D Others might not agree but well thats my honest opinion.
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