Review Detail of phoenix_8888 in World Development System

This is one of the very few original novels that I am speeding through especially for the first 50 chapters everything is happening so fast. It's not bad but it could be better. I feel like the novel is a self tutorial in writing a story as well as improving one's English language skills. The goal is nice however the reader ends up going through a trial and error exercise of grammar, sentence structure and requests for editing which at times the author ignores. There is stability of updates which I'm sure the readers appreciate. This novel will be in my library for now. However, I do advise the author that if the readers give constructive criticism e.g. repetition/carry forward of previous chapter to the next, please note and try to correct it. This would help you a lot. Take care.