Review Detail of xcares in World Development System
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Awkward wording/story/characters etc. It should be 1 star but i like the "system" type described. Author should improve his/her English before attempting to write a novel. Trash translators might get away with bad English but an author should not waste his time on a language he can't use. Hope the author keeps improving on all accounts and will successfully implement his idea in the future.
World Development System
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Should i submit myself to this failed attempt for a few more chapters? Will the author's English progress fast enough? Why? Just rewrite the whole thing when it is passable. No.Rewrite the thing when his English is GOOD ENOUGH.
GodEndra:You have only read to chapter 2. Way too early of a judgement
xcares:Should i submit myself to this failed attempt for a few more chapters? Will the author's English progress fast enough? Why? Just rewrite the whole thing when it is passable. No.Rewrite the thing when his English is GOOD ENOUGH.
The point is that one should properly use the language BEFORE beginning to write. Claiming otherwise is stupid.Just stupid
GodEndra:Then find yourself some premium novels. You won't be finding perfect grammar in free novels.