Review Detail of Nightdrift in World Development System
Review detail
I really want to rate this novel higher, and it deserves higher, it is just butchered by the lack of a good editor, the writing feels like a robot is spitting out sentences, not the slick new ai kind of robot, think 1970's style automatons, punctuation and an utter lack of sentence flow unfortunately obscure the potential this novel has, leaving the characters and story dry and uninteresting. This is sad as the story and characters aren't nearly as bad as the disjointed sentences make them out to be. Please Mr Author, find someone, anyone, to edit your chapters.
World Development System
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