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autistic25
autistic25Author5yrautistic25

Hello guys.this is Autistic25 here.this is my first time writing a novel.i hope you guys give me some slack by the way i don't mind support and compliments :P. about the updates i will try to update it as much as possible every day if permitted. This novel is quite a sci-fi vs magic novel plus there will be politics,business,kingdom building and wars as the main theme of this novel. English is my second language so if there are mistakes please help. Thank you for reading my novel. P.S-i will shamelessly rate myself a 5 star for self-motivation :P.

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Hyowha
HyowhaLv5Hyowha

you should add a space after a period and a comma. That is usually how the rule goes

autistic25
autistic25Authorautistic25

thanks for the suggestion. will update it same way for earlier chapters aswell. Thanks a lot.

Hyowha
HyowhaLv5Hyowha

No problem, and I just realized another thing, just like how the ‘I’s are always capitalized (I know, weird) so is the first letter after the period. Like this. If you want to really improve your grammatical writing, I would recommend googling the book “the element of style” PDF. It is a rather short one and a classic for many natives. If you only read the grammar part, -although I recommend you to read all- it will be even shorter (about 15 pages, 100 words each). Good luck on your journey.

autistic25:thanks for the suggestion. will update it same way for earlier chapters aswell. Thanks a lot.
HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5HansTheCool

Is the mc op good sir?

daoissssssttt
daoisssssstttLv4daoissssssttt

Is that a grammar book?

Hyowha:No problem, and I just realized another thing, just like how the ‘I’s are always capitalized (I know, weird) so is the first letter after the period. Like this. If you want to really improve your grammatical writing, I would recommend googling the book “the element of style” PDF. It is a rather short one and a classic for many natives. If you only read the grammar part, -although I recommend you to read all- it will be even shorter (about 15 pages, 100 words each). Good luck on your journey.
Immortal_Kaizer
Immortal_KaizerLv13Immortal_Kaizer

Bro author this novel is superb.. from this day i'll vote for u..

Hyowha
HyowhaLv5Hyowha

it is about writing style mostly. But yes, it includes grammar

daoissssssttt:Is that a grammar book?
daoissssssttt
daoisssssstttLv4daoissssssttt

Wow thanks for the info. But where I can find it, can you tell me please...🙂

Hyowha:it is about writing style mostly. But yes, it includes grammar
Hyowha
HyowhaLv5Hyowha

just look for the pdf, since it is so old it is already free for everyone. Still the age i see a testament for the classic, which has the most concise points on writing a book. Even people like stephen king have it recommended. Google ‘The Element of Style, William Strunk Jr. PDF’. You don’t have to read all of it, you can skip to the parts that interest you, without fearing that you might not follow (although you will be missing some very valuable tidbits).

daoissssssttt:Wow thanks for the info. But where I can find it, can you tell me please...🙂
daoissssssttt
daoisssssstttLv4daoissssssttt

Thanks ☺️

Hyowha:just look for the pdf, since it is so old it is already free for everyone. Still the age i see a testament for the classic, which has the most concise points on writing a book. Even people like stephen king have it recommended. Google ‘The Element of Style, William Strunk Jr. PDF’. You don’t have to read all of it, you can skip to the parts that interest you, without fearing that you might not follow (although you will be missing some very valuable tidbits).
Fire_rain
Fire_rainLv5Fire_rain

This is harem? [Yes/No] Please, nooooooo😘

ikkawerehere
ikkawerehereLv5ikkawerehere

first question is there love in this i mean the mc and some one.. i hope for a no... and secound question and most importenly is this a harem? and yes i hope for a big NO...

dagaraunak
dagaraunakLv6dagaraunak

Can you please stop starting the chapters from the last chapter. This only increases the word count but the readers get irritated and lose interest also.

autistic25
autistic25Authorautistic25

I already stopped doing that 2 chapters ago.

dagaraunak:Can you please stop starting the chapters from the last chapter. This only increases the word count but the readers get irritated and lose interest also.
ELord
ELordLv5ELord

Can you please say whether its harem or not? i dont want to waste my time reading harem novels.

autistic25:I already stopped doing that 2 chapters ago.
ImmortalizedGod
ImmortalizedGodLv10ImmortalizedGod

Will there be romance? ( I prefer none, would rather want to focus on the story, than waste time reading those fillers)

shashank_bhatt
shashank_bhattLv13shashank_bhatt

Is it a Harem??

autistic25:thanks for the suggestion. will update it same way for earlier chapters aswell. Thanks a lot.
autistic25
autistic25Authorautistic25

I am not about it. But It can be later on.

shashank_bhatt:Is it a Harem??
faijay98
faijay98Lv5faijay98

Hope there will be a romance it's so lonely if there's none.

autistic25:I am not about it. But It can be later on.
noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

Is it op mc?

autistic25:I am not about it. But It can be later on.