Review Detail of Slothiticus in Reborn in DC (anti-hero)

I was not impressed with this story. aside from grammatical errors which I won't go over there is a real lack of true character building right out the gate you go through several time skips only stopping to cover something unimportant or just add in some marvel concept like Jarvis or danger room. Then there is the poorly chosen wishes that steals ideas from various fiction with no originality or creativity except the last one which was just pathetic and proves that there was no intention to develop characters and their relationships its much easier just to magic those in. Characters are killed off but doesn't matter cause they were personality equivalents to white noise. truth is this story could maybe be good all it needs to do is get a new name, start over, be creative this time, and slow down developing the characters in a meaningful way, oh and to figuratively burn this one so readers arnt tarnished with its presence.