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certe
certeLv56yr
2019-02-19 20:21

Mc has no personality, he is basically plot armor for luffy's crew. writing quality is poor - sentences are not properly structured , dialogue is messy.

One Piece The Over( Abandoned )

13th_Night
3.4
2 Chs

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VictoriousFighting
VictoriousFightingLv4

For you who want to have MC that will become Lufy's Golden Finger then read this, and for you who like MC that have ambition then leave this because the MC basically Golden Finger for Luffy and his crew and seems lack of dream. It may or may not be author's wild dream to add more plot armor for Luffy and his crew. A good promotion to attract Fanboy to read i guess

6yr

usernanne
usernanneLv4

The writing quality is ****: "he fell like he was flooding in water" "When he understands that he was fetus inside his mother's womb. " The story itself seems to be just a giant power wank. At the age of 5 he is already stronger than vice captains or so the story says. I haven't even fully read the first chapter and already hate it.

6yr
GGMissFortune
GGMissFortuneLv6

Trash fic trash plot MC became plot armor for original MCs... Trash fic trash plot MC became plot armor for original MCs... Trash fic trash plot MC became plot armor for original MCs... Trash fic trash plot MC became plot armor for original MCs...

6yr
AKARYUU
AKARYUULv14

Promising and interesting story. Stable updates. From this story may come something good. But author spends too much time on useless filler arcs.

6yr
ENYS
ENYSLv5

I only read a few chapters but i wanted to leave a review before abandonning this fanfiction. Good point: The idea is good and interesting (cultivator in one piece). I like the story's title (It attracted me here) Bad point: The grammar is bad. It follows too much the main plot of one piece (the MC isn't doing much). The plot is rushed and characters like the old man, i feel, were created for nothing. The main character isn't coherent, why did he cry when his mother died?! (I know you wrote a bunch of sentences in the story but it doesn't make sense as he is supposed to be a cultivator and he is supposed to at least be a bit more cold). For all the bad points, i won't continue to read this story, but still good luck.

6yr
StressedByHW
StressedByHWLv4

Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone Yea I’m not a fan of the mc working under someone

6yr
HarmonyOne
HarmonyOneLv3

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Hemaninom
HemaninomLv3

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Chlain
ChlainLv5

Reveal spoiler

6yr
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