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JefferyM
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2022-11-17 06:12

This story needs editing quite badly. It is readable, but verging on headache worthy. The author mixes up gender pronouns and tenses in almost every sentence. Sentence structures are routinely awkward. The story has started put pretty well, but I'm probably going to do to the issues already mention, but I will give it a couple !ore chapters..

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