Review Detail of Jeanean_Lain in The Dragon’s Kin

For a start, this story is very good until now! Definetly a worthwhile read! Writing quality is very good, though there are a few spelling or grammar mistakes and sometimes a little akward sounding sentences are mixed in, none of these happen regularly or obstruct the flow. So compared to other works, very good! Although I cant make out a main plot just yet, I can already make a few assumptions and a few side plots are taking shape nicely. The character designs are all unique and interresting in thir own ways, though the story still hasnt gone enough in depth to say more. The world background seems a little generic for the time beeing, so although its not the most original one, its also nothing weird, so neither especially good but also not bad. Totaly in my comfortzone. I can definitely already see a funny and interesting story of a mother and daughter pair going around slaying monsters while being over the top, be it in combat power, humor, beauty or cuteness!