Review Detail of littleonevixen in Battered Young Miss

Thanks for the review, it would be great if you could use that energy to write an actual story. ^That would be an awesome accomplishment to achieve^

I'm sorry I hurt your feelings but you character got fired and then her uncle walked over and beat her face in with no explanation and somehow didn't get caught. Not to mention him eating and forcing someone to gag on his... Well anyway, the lawyer walks in and tells her all your money is gone and as she freaks out she turns on the one person who's been there through this whole mess. Oh and the abusive relationship with the boyfriend who gets caught cheating and hits her. She breaks down for the boyfriend, says nothing before the vote to vote her out of her CEO position, says and does nothing about her uncle beating her into the ground, then hits the driver while she rampages. None of this established her as a character and you have a chapter in the middle which gives more character to the uncle establishing him as an evil for evils sake villain and she has yet to show any positive personality traits. I'm not the only person who gave this novel a low rating yet I'm the only one you replied to. I Didn't rate the update frequency because it's at zero right now and if there had been more sustenance more character development more something other than violence and nonsense penalties then my review wouldn't have been so harsh. I would use this as constructive criticism rather than going to tear another author down because you're mad someone called out your writing strategy. If you're mad get better that's all I can say.