I really like the premise and suspeense in the story and although the writing could use some improvement it is still quite well done as (i assume) this is purely a hobby. The world background is also quite good but i feel like the it is a bit rushed without much explanation, now as this could be used for the plot at the moment i have no real complaints. Overall 8.5/10
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