Review Detail of F_Riley in Dark Star Survivor

One of the best stories on this site. The author has the ability to tell a story and his deft use of plot and imagery are consistent and well done. I don't review many stories, but when I do, it's because there is something special. The only complaint I have is that the story isn't longer. People always clamor for mass releases, but this one really needs one. It's hard for me to fathom why this story isn't more highly ranked.