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bloo
blooLv145yr
2019-07-02 16:42

Do you have any idea how hard it is to find a story with a female MC, that's not either; -Genderbent MC who acts as if they were male -Some Assassin who goes back in time to get revenge -The third daughter of this random duke and her black belly prince! Yuck! I'm so confused on why we don't have any female MCs with an actual story that isn't some cringe romance ****. Just look at the top 3 originals on this site. Yuck! This story has plot! Characters actually develop! There's incredible world building! The side characters are all distinct! Grammar? Perfectly readable! If there's any negative, I'd say it's that the villians follow the arrogant noble archetype. It's kind of stale, so they're not that entertaining. But everything else in this story more than makes up for it. I cannot recommend this story enough.

Dark Star Survivor

Enraged_Bear
4.6
244 Chs

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Enraged_Bear
Enraged_BearAuthor

Thank you for the review and the feedback! <3

5yr
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up_in_the_sky
up_in_the_skyLv6

This review is hilarious and helpful, thanks a lot.

4yr
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up_in_the_sky
up_in_the_skyLv6

This review is hilarious and helpful, thanks a lot.

4yr
up_in_the_sky
up_in_the_skyLv6

This review is hilarious and helpful, thanks a lot.

4yr
Missrealitybites
MissrealitybitesLv14

I came across your review and cannot help chuckle on the stereotypes.. 😆 If you're still looking, may I suggest you to check my book Finding Stardust? It's a sci-fi romance with female MC with an actual story and hopefully not cliche. I'd love to know your thoughts on it.

4yr
LostPaladin
LostPaladinLv15

I think female characters that can stand alone are the best. I find the shadow guardians aka male leads to be annoying. As it makes it seem like the main female could not survive without them.

4yr
Chaos_Factory
Chaos_FactoryLv13

are you still updating this novel or did you drop it?

Enraged_Bear:Thank you for the review and the feedback! <3
2yr
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GRoy
GRoyLv13

I think is the first time when i make a review for a novel where the MC is a female. And I love this FC. I don’t wish to spoil so I will speak in general terms. The world background is slowly built, you will discover it at the same time as the FC. No info dumps here and there, so you don’t need to skip paragraphs or chapters, like in other novels, info dump that you will forget it the next day. Stability of updating..... hmmm... I will not ask anymore the Authors to post daily, I realized that they are humans, they have a family and a social life, or maybe they are sick or don’t have inspiration. I’m happy if the novel is not dropped ✌️. Writing quality... no complaints. Story development is slow. But pleasant and you will want more always. Character design... the FC is a smart girl, calm and collected, with a survivor mentality and in this story will learn to live the life again. Give it a try, maybe you will like it. Review made after the first 34chs.

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miomoimeik
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after starting yet another story written by someone with a good idea but worse than bad writing, that somehow (as always on this friggin site) had almost nothing than 5-star ratings, i was not optimistic about this one... and oh god was i wrong!! this story is great! I like the way it works atm, and though it has potential for too-quick op-ness, it does not seem to be heading that way. The characters are great, the magic is intriguing, and the world is well-made. i can only say that it is a hidden gem! sadly, this little gem is buried between crappy stories that get raving reviews from what are either bots, paid people, or blind people.

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F_Riley
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One of the best stories on this site. The author has the ability to tell a story and his deft use of plot and imagery are consistent and well done. I don't review many stories, but when I do, it's because there is something special. The only complaint I have is that the story isn't longer. People always clamor for mass releases, but this one really needs one. It's hard for me to fathom why this story isn't more highly ranked.

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Fimbultyr
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____________________________________________________ I like it. It's a nice story. Had a slow start but it's getting more action. ____________________________________________________

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gicch
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helixio
helixioLv5

Really good. The beginning is quite slow but it is worthwhile to continue. In addition, I particularly appreciate the punctuality of updates. By cons I think this story is more for the royalroad website than webnovel. The story is (in my opinion) one of the best of the site currently.

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Aicha_Hamidou
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Just started reading and I am excited to see where this story take me.😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

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wintersbrown
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HellsGate
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There's not a lot of info but I'm pretty glad to not be reading an info dump. I thought that during the time in between the space travel that author would use it for a info dump but I was wrong. Pacing is good important characters are clearly introduced so that you know you will see them again. The Heritage system needs a bit more explaining but besides that it's a good start. Depending on how it goes it could become a good hidden gem. Looking forward to the future chapters.

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