Review Detail of quiet000 in The Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy (A One Piece Fanfiction)

This is a very fast speed journey through one piece, if you are a die hard fan. DO NOT READ! You will be annoy or worse, but if you are open minded. This is a good fan fiction, for a new vision into what could have happen, I find the new luffy, a better one to read most of the time minus the cursing parts that make a little sense.