Can't wait for the next chapter of this story of yours and for the pokemon world is it just generation 1 or is it all the generations? My main hope is that you don't drop your works or at least tell us if it does happen.
The story looks interesting except that I'm a little silly that despite having mystical eyes of death perception i don't use them to cut off the handcuffs they put on. But I'll still read it for the novelty.
