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2024-05-17 12:12

I’ll say this first, this type of multiverse is the type I enjoy most (multiple worlds in 1 scenario, not constant world hopping) but the whole revenge thing (while pretty well in the MCs right) the way he did it isn’t really my thing, if it’s yours it’s all good. Don’t get me wrong, I like it. It takes from places that even I wouldn’t expect, I mean Rising of The Shield Hero opening isn’t something you would think of when you think of the first chapter (props on you for that one author, loved it.) I just think that the overall wiriting quality, spacing and speed of how you delivered each chasing point needs to be slightly altered, but it’s still good. I was just expecting OVERGEARED you know? Like a Highschool DxD world with an MC with Pagma’s Sucessor class (Or Grid’s Blacksmithing skill) with a system. So unfortunately I’m gonna stop on this note, it’s just not my cup of tea and it feels like I was bamboozled as the sugar cubes I placed it my tea was actually salt. P.S. Do you know God Grid?

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