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Review Detail of Blue_Robin in A Cheap, OP Brawler

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Blue_Robin
Blue_RobinLv141yrBlue_Robin

Alright let me just say, if you think the author is still listening around here, he likely isn't. So don't come here looking to make any complaints in the comments of the novel. Aside from that, I liked this novel a lot. It's just dumb fun and comedy for the most part. A bit horny in others. It's a great read to pass the time! I mean the title makes it clear we won't be thinking too much anyways. That doesn't mean there isnt effort put into the world building though. Most things make sense. Besides the MC his defence is kinda funky to me. He is said to have magic resistance, but then later he can just be put to sleep like a baby without detecting said magic. He also very convenient for the plot, never doing anything that would hinder plot progression such as being actually cautious. He doesn't do that. He also thinks with his d*ck. All in all, MC is a 3/10 in my opinion. He had a good level of savagery in earlier chapters but that just fades away in exchange for the horny. There's also his harem members. They are just kinda there. They fall in love, and they just kinda become praise vending machines. Some of the initial intrigue they might have is lost as they just become these featureless blobs of love. Besides Nyra. Nyra is the best character you will ever meet. Then there is the classic "I am doing this for your own good giving me the right to manipulate you and your companions and get away scot-free" trope. That alongside the introduction of quick one night stands being the final nail in the coffin. It was good, but the mc is kinda just someone who floats on the plot rather then moving it forward. This just leads him to slowly lose the good first impression he made early on. I got to around 111 before giving out by the way. Anyways I am sure this story suits someone, just not me.

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A Cheap, OP Brawler

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Orange_Rain
Orange_RainAuthorOrange_Rain

Hello, while I'd rather you didn't force yourself to tredge through a story you don't seem to have much liking to, I appreciate the effort getting to the latest chapter and leaving the review. I'll be honest, this is one of, if not *the* first publicly-released, original stories I posted on the web, and believe me, this is more like a renewed version of what I had originally had going before even putting it up. It was MUCH worse, imo. I know this story's gotten so disorganized and lengthy that its pacing's even slower than a snail's, believe me. At this point, it's become more like a 'writer's improvement tool' that I'm trying to keep going until I find a decent point to end the series, and then go back to make the necessary changes for a huge retcon. I'm currently writing other stories that are better than this in multiple aspects, and I'll find a good time to post them in public. In the meantime, know that I've seen your review, I thank you again for reading, and if you want to suffer through this to the very end, feel free to do so.

Blue_Robin
Blue_RobinLv14Blue_Robin

I have decided to make the effort to keep reading. Why? I like Nyra's character. She carries every conversation and her noticing something's off has given me hope.

Blue_Robin
Blue_RobinLv14Blue_Robin

Nah I'll stick around. It makes for good filler when I don't got nothing else to read.

Orange_Rain:Hello, while I'd rather you didn't force yourself to tredge through a story you don't seem to have much liking to, I appreciate the effort getting to the latest chapter and leaving the review. I'll be honest, this is one of, if not *the* first publicly-released, original stories I posted on the web, and believe me, this is more like a renewed version of what I had originally had going before even putting it up. It was MUCH worse, imo. I know this story's gotten so disorganized and lengthy that its pacing's even slower than a snail's, believe me. At this point, it's become more like a 'writer's improvement tool' that I'm trying to keep going until I find a decent point to end the series, and then go back to make the necessary changes for a huge retcon. I'm currently writing other stories that are better than this in multiple aspects, and I'll find a good time to post them in public. In the meantime, know that I've seen your review, I thank you again for reading, and if you want to suffer through this to the very end, feel free to do so.