Review Detail of CylaSoul666 in A Cheap, OP Brawler

Item: A Cheap, OP Brawler
Rating: 4

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The story itself is good but I think that the way it’s progressing is a bit slow plus you don’t really describe the setting as much as the action parts also the character description doesn’t really explain a lot of their features, anyway, other then that your story is great, I hope you write more!

A Cheap, OP Brawler

Orange_Rain

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Orange_RainAuthorOrange_Rain

Thank you very much for your critique! Funny enough, I was worried I might go into too much detail which would slow the pacing even more, and I'm usually very bad with that. Difficult trying to keep chapters within 3500 words. -_-; I'll be sure to apply this in future chapters!

5yr