Review Detail of looFehT in The God Virus
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This is one of my favourite novels. Why? Because it has a very interesting, new concept. There are no clichées (except for that one young master character but he got taken care of the very next chapter) and stuff like that, only the story. The ai has emotions and a human body but one can still notice how in it's core, it's still an ai, no matter how advanced, but I like that as humans have too many shortcomings. The really interesting stuff (financial war and cultivation) is also starting to pick off. As the ai is really advanced, you can expect it to dominate. The writing is not 100% perfect but definitely good enough to not disrupt the flow of the story. The updates are quite stable and fast (I would still prefer more though ;-) ). The characters seem pretty well-written and show emotion and the world backrground is basically just earth in the beginning of the 21st century. Overall a very nice story, 10/10 would recommend.
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MadReader:Finally... the number one power stone giver... I was wondering why you haven't left a review yet :) but finally the wait is over and here you are. Anyway... thank you... really🌷🌼
some of your point is quite right to the point, but if it come to the part about it actually good or not, then I don't think so, especially the writing part like grammar, structure sentence, perceptive writing of some character, it not good. if you want to see a good one to get a clear idea, here is few novel example to check out: My House of Horrors Until Death? (Refleshed Version) (if you like OP evil mc, in a good way, from royalroad) Druidic Cultivation (from royalroad) The Voyager: Remastered (this is how a pragmatic, cold logic but clever mc should be, from royalroad) Lia and Lara will seek the One Piece (this is how a good OP mc novel should be, from royalroad, you should check his other novel, aside from 'Dexs/ Clairs Adventure' since it his first novel and aren't edit, so quite bad compare to other one, but if you want to start the series story from the start, then that is the one) World Domination System Necrotourists (this is one good sh*t, very damn funny and well written, great meme potential, from royalroad) Painting the Mists (a very good cultivate novel, at Amazon book level in writing)
His grammar is actually pretty much flawless, I dont know what you mean. The only thing bothering me is the slow pace but still. I will check out the stories but I dislike the mc of World Domination System as he's pretty soft (I read to 115)
ArashiTenebris:some of your point is quite right to the point, but if it come to the part about it actually good or not, then I don't think so, especially the writing part like grammar, structure sentence, perceptive writing of some character, it not good. if you want to see a good one to get a clear idea, here is few novel example to check out: My House of Horrors Until Death? (Refleshed Version) (if you like OP evil mc, in a good way, from royalroad) Druidic Cultivation (from royalroad) The Voyager: Remastered (this is how a pragmatic, cold logic but clever mc should be, from royalroad) Lia and Lara will seek the One Piece (this is how a good OP mc novel should be, from royalroad, you should check his other novel, aside from 'Dexs/ Clairs Adventure' since it his first novel and aren't edit, so quite bad compare to other one, but if you want to start the series story from the start, then that is the one) World Domination System Necrotourists (this is one good sh*t, very damn funny and well written, great meme potential, from royalroad) Painting the Mists (a very good cultivate novel, at Amazon book level in writing)
'flawless' ? , I guess you are on his latest chapter, because the early chapter I have point out a lot of typos (even to chapter 48, there are still typos), grammar there (and if you don't see in the volume 1, maybe he have edited after I point it out on his discord, you can check there and you will see my comment point the error) about the 'World Domination System', actually later he do become ruthless when necessary, you just haven't reach it yet, if you have any question to that, you can go to that author discord to ask, they are quite active and willing to answer for you here and you need a bit patient to read that novel, that all
looFehT:His grammar is actually pretty much flawless, I dont know what you mean. The only thing bothering me is the slow pace but still. I will check out the stories but I dislike the mc of World Domination System as he's pretty soft (I read to 115)
