Review Detail of PsyberRose in SHORT STORIES(MIXED)

It's a different sort of story. Initially, I had trouble catching up on what was happening, but overall, it's a good story. Writing Quality: It's decent, and one can understand the content itself. IT has also gradually improved as the chapters go by. However, I'd advice Author to break down the paragraphs more. Having so many sentences (especially with dialogue) can make it look rather messy. Also, it's nice if there is spacing after a fullstop. Eg: (1) Here. Then start. (2) Instead of: Here.Then start. Stability of Updates: 5* out of good faith. Story Development: It's progressing nicely. A little bit of mystery and a whole lot of violence, amidst all sorts of feelings. Character Design & World Background: Adequate, though perhaps you could flesh out the characters more. As in, describe their thoughts or feelings, so that one can get more personal with the characters. All in all, a story that has potential. All the best, Author!