Review Detail of PeachyPearl in SHORT STORIES(MIXED)

As a part of review swap, I've read this novel until the last updated chapter. Writing Quality: 3.8/5 Well reading the whole book so far, it feels like your writing quality has improved from the previous chapters but there's still a lot of scope for improvement. Stability of Updates: 5/5 Works for me. Story Development: 4.5/5 The story is moderately paced which is a good thing. It's neither too fast nor slow. Character design: 4/5 A little more work could be done on the way the characters are portrayed. World Background: 4.4/5 Quite nicely shown the things around but needs a little work. The overall feel was moderate. It wasn't bad to be in your world. Keep it up author.