Review Detail of NatsumeRikka in FORBIDDEN LOVE- A PILE OF PAST MISTAKES.
Review detail
This book is like a red paper crane among a hoarde of white paper boats. Different, amusing and controversial. It's different from all novels out there. More hilarious than usual romcom novels, and controversial cause I certainly can't tell where the plot's gonna take me and contradicts my guesses. Author-san, the only thing I'm sad about is that you sometimes write in caps and the other times in small. Also, the punctuation marks aren't on spot. Initially I was irritated about the short chapters, but later, it actually didn't bother me. All the best author-san! Keep up the good work! Also, don't take my words to heart. I'm just giving some suggestions. P.S: You should get an editor to edit your works. Sometimes, another person's pov can change many things. That's it. ♥ ♥ ♥
FORBIDDEN LOVE- A PILE OF PAST MISTAKES.
stella2138
Liked by 1 people
LIKEReplies7
stella2138:THANKS FOR YOUR SUGGESTION. I'M STILL EDITING THE CAPLOCKS CHAPTERS. I PROMISE IT WILL GET BETTER. THIS NOVEL IS MY PRECIOUS BABY. I WOULD DO ANY THING FOR IT. THANKS FOR YOUR HONESTY FRIEND. AND OOPS JUST LIKE WHAT CKTALON SAID I'M REALLY CRAZY ABOUT CAPLOCKS. I NEED SOMME EXCORCISING RIGHT?
I GOT INSPIRATION AND IM WRITING A NEW NOVEL BESIDES THIS ONE SO UPDATES MAY NOT BE AS FAST AS BEFORE .its called UGLY CONCUBINE'S MISSION"STEAL THE EMPEROR'S HEART. its also funny and i love it a lot. i hope you like it and please reply me bac on how you feel about it. all the best my friend
NatsumeRikka:Nah it's fine, adorable in some ways, lol.
Oh wow, I'll definitely read it. Sorry I haven't been on WN for sometime, had my exams. I'm back now!
stella2138:I GOT INSPIRATION AND IM WRITING A NEW NOVEL BESIDES THIS ONE SO UPDATES MAY NOT BE AS FAST AS BEFORE .its called UGLY CONCUBINE'S MISSION"STEAL THE EMPEROR'S HEART. its also funny and i love it a lot. i hope you like it and please reply me bac on how you feel about it. all the best my friend
NatsumeRikka:Oh wow, I'll definitely read it. Sorry I haven't been on WN for sometime, had my exams. I'm back now!