Review Detail of chronos10 in A Gun-Slinging Soul-Reaper (A Bleach Fan-fiction)

It is a good chapters you follow the original anime but it is different due to its zanpakuto and it is very interesting. In the following chapter try to use its shikai differently or an improve version of this fighting style. Let ichigo be not so dense around girl but no harem and try something between orihime and ichigo. The dark ichigo is very good and try to make him not to stupid.