Review Detail of SecretBarone in Lewd System

I really enjoyed reading this story despite the not so interesting title. However, the detail description are still lacking but can easily improved. This will help to convey the message the author wanted to convey. Better still the xx scene could be complimented with pictures Nonetheless, the characters are interesting and the plot are not so stereotype hence why i am still reading. Moreover i was hoping that since the novel is no longer free, the chapters should be longer to commentsurate the number of power stones payable for each chapter