Review Detail of KingGrizzly in RWBY: Reborn With A System

This is a cluster **** of anime cliches. While there are some good ones in there, most of them are bad and rather cheesy or have been used so many times that they appear overused. The good ones are the fluffy tail and ears, when someone talks about you you sneeze and the transfer student is so cool, the rest is **** in my opinion. Right now where the chapters are currently at don't make sense or just bore me. While I like how the author is trying to start a new original arc that isn't related to the main story completely, he is just not making the arc interesting enough to make me want to read more. Grammar and spelling could be better but it's not to the point where I doubt it's written in the English language. I just want to see them all grown up so that they all go to beacon academy. To be honest ever since I learned Gin is like a half faunas I really wanted him and blake to meet, like who doesn't like catgirls. Overall this story ain't that good, you would be better of searching for something else. While there are some good moments hidden in there it's not worth reading if you have to find the good moments. I call tell this can improve if it just gets rid of the some of the cliches the author is using and come up with new situations (Character interaction and reaction to the MC is always good in my opinion), it seems to me like the author is basing his story to some stupid cheesy slice of life, high school anime. Also if he could improve his grammar and spelling as well as skip this arc he's started releasing or maybe speeding things up a bit then it would be more interesting. I like the originality and were the authors trying to take the story, but please use the original story arc of RWBY as your crutch and incorporate some of your originality into the story later on, and when you can do that at a satisfactory level then do what you're doing now, as I believe this is too much for you to do. P.S. My previous review (Not this review) was just a rant, it was just me releasing frustration and anger and such. It is heavily biased and is an unfair review of the fanfic. Please read the fanfic before you make up your mind.