Review Detail of HeavenlySun in RWBY: Reborn With A System
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You know I like this novel but at the same time I HATE it. When I think of a system I think they would give you cool power with shop,quest,lottery,inventory and a lot of cool stuff but your system is kinda suck it only give you information and inventory what's the point of the you could of just call it the leveling up system or game system after all game system did give you information about your skill, race, health, mana, etc...... The only extra thing your system has is emotinon apart from that I don't think there's a lot of advantage your system offer. It's way better if he get a cooler ability like devil fruit or cool bloodline that you don't have to unlock. ANYWAY like I said I don't hate you novel just saying what I want to say.
RWBY: Reborn With A System
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Glace:Thanks for the feedback, and this might be a spoiler but.... i have intended to put in a shop/lottery in it but that is for later ;)
It would destroy the world even if he chose something random like Idk Hokyogu,EA,Vimana,Boosted/Dividing Gear,Death Note,Type 100 Guanyian Bhodisattva,Ryujin Jakka,Gura Gura No Mi,Geass,Super Sayan,Final Tetsuga Tensho,Alchemy,Jinshurikies,Material Burst,One Punch Man,Sharingan/Rinnegan,Titan Shifting,Vector Manipulation,Servant,True Magic and Stands just too name a few thing that could fk anyone up
LordVendingMachine:It would destroy the world even if he chose something random like Idk Hokyogu,EA,Vimana,Boosted/Dividing Gear,Death Note,Type 100 Guanyian Bhodisattva,Ryujin Jakka,Gura Gura No Mi,Geass,Super Sayan,Final Tetsuga Tensho,Alchemy,Jinshurikies,Material Burst,One Punch Man,Sharingan/Rinnegan,Titan Shifting,Vector Manipulation,Servant,True Magic and Stands just too name a few thing that could fk anyone up
My exact thoughts, i can't find a system like the gamers. Only ones that make them super op or give them the sharihgan like EVERY story. Lol
DumplingJr:When I think of system I think of The Gamer, I donât think of all those things, sure sometimes it may be good to have those things but, that isnât what makes a system a system
