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I_Only_Sleep
I_Only_SleepAuthor4yrI_Only_Sleep

A minute of your time if you please. The reviews talking about the stupidity of the main character and plot armor in the earlier chapters is true. The reason I am not re-writing them is because i don't want to change things and then the later chapters are filled with plotholes. I am not asking for you to drag yourself through those chapters, if you can't take that stuff, then my advice to you is not to waste your time. Seeing as this is my first novel, I would like to think that my writing will get better over its course. This review is just to ward off less tolerant people, instead of them reading the novel and leaving a permanent negative review about something that I am working/have already worked on in the later chapters. I welcome criticism if it will help me improve my writing skills, but having the rating of my novel lowered because of a situation that is being solved/already been solved is just depressing. If you read to this point, thank you for your time. Hopefully, this review will not cause any misunderstandings

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Tylor_Roney
Tylor_RoneyLv14Tylor_Roney

Just wondering what tags of genre like romance loyal / harem or is our protagonist a virgin until he turns 1000 and at last few chapters does he build a city or army or create co rule a sect or does he do anything interesting or just seeks power and kill creatures and sells for coin do all the hard stuff all cultivation novels seem to do which ends up boring me

I_Only_Sleep
I_Only_SleepAuthorI_Only_Sleep

If you are asking if he will just be cultivating 24/7 then no. i don't want to say too much and spoil anything, but, yes there will be romance, no harem, not a virgin at 1000. as for building a sect....something like that. if you have any more questions, just ask, i will answer if i can.

Tylor_Roney:Just wondering what tags of genre like romance loyal / harem or is our protagonist a virgin until he turns 1000 and at last few chapters does he build a city or army or create co rule a sect or does he do anything interesting or just seeks power and kill creatures and sells for coin do all the hard stuff all cultivation novels seem to do which ends up boring me
Tylor_Roney
Tylor_RoneyLv14Tylor_Roney

Well as long as there is more then repeated battles im happy im into sect building there was a awesome novel about sect building the other side of a cultivation story i think it was called but it's dropped i think sadly I just love seeing those types but most cultivating stories never do it which I never understand since sects are important and i never believed a sect can lose to 1 individual its just dreaming no matter his or her talent of course they use the recarnated plot alot or i am a modern man i know everything even more then Google i got this (= Unless he is a plotter and uses people which involves a very smart writer

I_Only_Sleep:If you are asking if he will just be cultivating 24/7 then no. i don't want to say too much and spoil anything, but, yes there will be romance, no harem, not a virgin at 1000. as for building a sect....something like that. if you have any more questions, just ask, i will answer if i can.
Harmattan
HarmattanLv11Harmattan

A story must not have romance, even if it has, it mustn't be the McDonald's. Author-sama don't feel obligated to bring love into this, sometimes it spoils the book

Tylor_Roney:Just wondering what tags of genre like romance loyal / harem or is our protagonist a virgin until he turns 1000 and at last few chapters does he build a city or army or create co rule a sect or does he do anything interesting or just seeks power and kill creatures and sells for coin do all the hard stuff all cultivation novels seem to do which ends up boring me
I_Only_Sleep
I_Only_SleepAuthorI_Only_Sleep

Thanks for the advice. I've been thinking about adding romance since the beginning, so i don't feel forced, i just hope that it works out.

Harmattan:A story must not have romance, even if it has, it mustn't be the McDonald's. Author-sama don't feel obligated to bring love into this, sometimes it spoils the book
LTbutterfly287
LTbutterfly287Lv13LTbutterfly287

Romance if done well always makes the story better. But most authors these days are rushed and make very shallow love interests. Doesn’t help that many writers have abandoned character development and supporting characters for random face slapping and women just getting wet at the sight of the mc.

Harmattan:A story must not have romance, even if it has, it mustn't be the McDonald's. Author-sama don't feel obligated to bring love into this, sometimes it spoils the book
I_Only_Sleep
I_Only_SleepAuthorI_Only_Sleep

I will try to keep that in mind. Thanks for pointing it out.

LTbutterfly287:Romance if done well always makes the story better. But most authors these days are rushed and make very shallow love interests. Doesn’t help that many writers have abandoned character development and supporting characters for random face slapping and women just getting wet at the sight of the mc.
DeVoided
DeVoidedLv15DeVoided

harem please

Jackson_Alucard611
Jackson_Alucard611Lv14Jackson_Alucard611

pls tell me you are taking a break