Review Detail of tune50 in The Blood King

Question, do you know how i can fix this novel's plot armor problem? Just asking because you seem to know a lot about writing novels\stories.

Other than the blood lord inheritance since that in it self is sort of a plot armor, anything else that gives the mc power up make him fight for it, make him think one step ahead instead of depending on someone else save in a critical situation. The way I see it the main character is cold which is fine but he tends to be very explosive with his reactions/thoughts and doesn’t think before he tries to kill someone powerful and fails. I would say keep going with the cold personality but slowly change how he reacts to situation, he doesn’t have to bow to other but make him back down in situation rather than going along with his forceful reactions like the time with his master. His master gave into him because he believed the mc is very talented, that in it self can be considered a plot armor, just remember a dead genius can never threaten anyone. For example make him work in the shadows or something, just don’t make it a cliche moment where the mc just happens to break through at the right moment or a old monster appreciates his talent and decides to save him. I mean you can’t totally avoid all these but try not to use it too much. Also for blood line, don’t just feed him his predecessors hard work make him experiment and let him use his brain, he might even improve the blood line. Overall just make him work for things for the most part, don’t just make it so he happens to just find the exact thing he needs at the moment, maybe use a replacement materials or make him trade with someone. Also just because he is the main character doesn’t mean he takes the right path in his cultivation, make him take a wrong path here and there then let him fix it later or find a solution to it. Maybe let him find a new way to cultivate, something he comes up with by accident by combining with array or something. Also, the blood line system you have is fine but you could make it more so that rather than just taking the good traits of other beasts/species he might grow a tail or something or an ugly head or it screws with his thought process, you can also make it so that it starts happening because the beast bloodline is very high lvl or something. Then he has to understand the bloodline and learn what part of the gene/he needs to turn off of remove. You get the idea where I am going with that. All this to make it seems nothing comes for free you have to work for it, and you aren’t a heavens chosen or some destiny plot armor chap. I don’t know how much this helps you but it’s hard to give ideas when I don’t know what path you want to continue the story, how detailed you want it to be and how much logic you want to use. Sorry for any typos just wrote this on my phone, hope it helps.

Thank you very much, i will try to work on these few points in the future. Hopefully, it will work out.

Good luck, because it's a lot, going to be hard to put together.

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