Review Detail of GodForsaken in The Saint's Lie (First Version: Dropped)

Hello guys(and gals)! This is gonna be my second attempt at xianxia novel, and seeing as how all the other shameless authors have done it, I'm gonna give it 5 stars. I'm not sure if anyone is actually ever gonna see this novel in the sea of  writting on this site, but hey it's fine either way. In one scenario I get some fun writting experience and if some people do see this novel, I hope they enjoy it. Although if not, just leave a comment on the chapter or review section on what you think I need to improve on and I'll take key note of it. Well I'm rambling, I just hope that will be a pleasant experience for you guys(and gals). *Some of you may be wondering why I use chinese names in this novel when I'm writting it for a western audience. Well primarily it's because all my experience with xiancias/eastern fantasy has involved Chinese names, so to keep to the feeling I'm just gonna go with it. Although it should also be at note that if there is some actual meaning behind certain names that it isn't on purpose. I know some Chinese authors do that, but my understanding of Chinese is too superficial if not non-existant to do that.