Review Detail of strippe in Under the Veil of Night

I have read the first 100 chapters after the novel has been finished. It has an Intriguing story after 100 or so chapters to say the least but after chapter 20 or so the grammar gets annoying to look at. The editor did a great job with those chapters but the rest of the novel needs time to be edited. If ever edited it could be one of the best novels on this app. It is the best of the novels she has written so far and not unreadable if you can deal with multiple tense or pronoun issues. Those due do kill enjoyment for me personally but if you can look past that I think this is the best book she has written so far. Ive only read Flowers bloom on the battlefield or whatever it is called by her. Novel could ve fantastic in quality but needs a lot of editing.