Review Detail of Shikurana in Captivate [To Be Deleted]

My thoughts are unorganized! I enjoyed reading this story but in all honest opinion it went from interesting to unsatisfying. The story revolves to much on what the FL wants though obviously it’s her story, this doesn’t give spotlight to other characters except for the FL and hurtful past of the ML. I felt like the minor characters was only written to have more characters. Therefore making me exhausted most of the time when I read this. Another thing is that it doesn’t justify the ending of every character especially the ending of the ML. Though I am happy for the FL it’s too unfair for the ending of ML. I without a doubt still enjoyed this but I hope for either revision or making a second book that can give more life for the other characters while still focusing on the life of ML and FL and also making the flow of the story more organized.