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Review Detail of CouchPotato in Captivate [To Be Deleted]

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CouchPotato
CouchPotatoLv45yrCouchPotato

As of ch153. This is one of those novels which started out great but is going downhill as it progresses. Character development is poor ESPECIALLY in the case of the FL—The author forces its readers to sympathise with her, which is quite reasonable in the early chapters. But after the rebirth? Her actions towards the ML was beyond unreasonable! It is a rebirth where none of the things that happened in the last lifetime happened in the present, but she was so hung up with her last lifetime that she’s making it hard for the ML everytime, Always being a ***** without any rhyme or reason. Seriously author? Are u confused with the concept of rebirth? Why are u making the story like it was a case of past and present? The only good thing here i see is the char devt for the ML, i can see how the author is slowly redeeming him and i applaud her for this, that i hope she wont end up butchering this progress. Now on to the latest chs, i dont even know dude, all i can do is *sigh*

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Yashika13
Yashika13Lv5Yashika13

Rebirth is like a parallel universe. She died in her original universe and she went back in time or goes to parallel universe which is exactly the same as the original by the law of universe what happened in the original universe and time will happen in current universe because of time. If events will to change then the flow of time will change and will effect the flow of universe. It's just a time travel and parallel universe theory. If she will not retaliate against ML, the exact same things, same events will happen again.

xiaoerxun
xiaoerxunLv13xiaoerxun

look here mate the main thing is she has backbone and is a real human, once love turns to hate it is hard for it to be reversed and unlike other novels where the FL just forgives the ML and forgets all her memories, this FL is portrayed as a human, who doesnt have flaws, and i respect her for not spreading her legs again just because the ML does one or two romantic things, and read the newest chapter youll fall in love, yo probably already have by now, but if it left at chpt 184 ill fight the authour till one of us dies

CouchPotato
CouchPotatoLv4CouchPotato

Nah sorry mate, i get ur point but this novel isn’t my cup of tea. It’s not just about the FL but with the plotline itself. So we’ll just have to agree to disagree 😉

xiaoerxun:look here mate the main thing is she has backbone and is a real human, once love turns to hate it is hard for it to be reversed and unlike other novels where the FL just forgives the ML and forgets all her memories, this FL is portrayed as a human, who doesnt have flaws, and i respect her for not spreading her legs again just because the ML does one or two romantic things, and read the newest chapter youll fall in love, yo probably already have by now, but if it left at chpt 184 ill fight the authour till one of us dies
xiaoerxun
xiaoerxunLv13xiaoerxun

i agree that the plotline is messed up, i just picked a bone regarding the FL

CouchPotato:Nah sorry mate, i get ur point but this novel isn’t my cup of tea. It’s not just about the FL but with the plotline itself. So we’ll just have to agree to disagree 😉