Review Detail of Charlotte8 in The Goddess that was a mistake

Very well written! A hilarious predicament for the main character. You have a flair for the absurd that reminds me a little of Terry Pratchett, a god in my personal pantheon. Clearly Riya should have been mind wiped before his/her reincarnation. I don't yet know where this story will lead, but you have me wanting to find out.