Review Detail of Jackhf in The Eternal Sanctum

The dedication the author put into the novel is evident, and amazing. The descriptions are vivid, and the realism is nicely portrayed in the characters. The history behind each idea and scene the author presents is nicely expanded, adhering to the traditional culture even if only the official's conversations are the only hint we get. There aren't much digressions from a traditional society and world except for the fantasy element, which is a refreshing read. The character realism is the best I've seen so far. From what we get, the main character doesn't possess a prestigious or overpowered skill foundation, but is more than sensible enough to adapt to her scenarios. She doesn't try to display any outlandish or extraordinary behavior, which is quite interesting and makes the reader wait for more. Although there hasn't been much dialogue from the main character, her thoughts are still nicely portrayed with indirect mentions and actions, a nice refresh from the classic "in your face" writing style. The novel is slow-paced but with a gradual plot, and has great potential. The grammar and writing style is excellent, and if the author is translating their own content to English before uploading it onto here, then extra kudos for that. Since it is still in the early stages, I'll drop another review when the novel is more developed. Good work!