Item: Convincing her (Jen and Lucas)
Rating: 4
Author: CailinMatthews

CailinMatthewsLv126yr

2019-03-08 21:32

I have to admit that when I read the title, the synopsis and the opening chapters, I thought it was going to be a dominant vs stubborn female type of thing. For this, I'm sorry, author. I was wrong. The story is actually started pretty normal minus the backgrounds these characters have which is nice because all people are human. It doesn't matter if a person is a prodigy or a genius, we all connect. The romance is cute and realistic. I love a fantasy/daydream romance as much as the next person but it's the realistic ones that have lessons in them. All stories do but sometimes the little things are overlooked. This had both which is truly satisfying. The characters are interesting enough. I can't say much because it's as if we get to know them as they get to know each other which seems to form a major plot of the book. And I am here for it. It's easy to get into a relationship—espeically these days but using your head and not only your heart can be a challenge. I love a level-headed character. It's such a breath of fresh air. That's pretty much it. The only critique I have is to cut some corners. The descriptive narrative is good but not everything is needed to said down to the last detail. ;) Good luck on your journey!

Convincing her (Jen and Lucas)

PinkCotton

4.7

527 Chs

Liked by 11 people

Replies11

PinkCottonAuthor

Thanks for the review :D I'm glad you enjoyed reading this... I have to say I do enjoy my fluff, but having a domineering male paired with a stubborn/*****/"innocent"/submissive female is a bit too much for me... goes against my personality completely... I wouldn't be able to relate to the character much... Your perspective was interesting, Thanks again for the review, I appreciate it :)

6yr

CailinMatthewsLv12

I do enjoy them sometimes but a guy who treat a girl as his equal would always top 👌

PinkCotton:Thanks for the review :D I'm glad you enjoyed reading this... I have to say I do enjoy my fluff, but having a domineering male paired with a stubborn/*****/"innocent"/submissive female is a bit too much for me... goes against my personality completely... I wouldn't be able to relate to the character much... Your perspective was interesting, Thanks again for the review, I appreciate it :)

6yr

PinkCottonAuthor

I think there was only 1 novel of that nature I was able to finish 😁😁😁 so I guess I can read them... but I wouldn't know how to start writing one... maybe I'll challenge myself to try in the future 😁

CailinMatthews:I do enjoy them sometimes but a guy who treat a girl as his equal would always top 👌

6yr

CailinMatthewsLv12

Nuuuuu just do you. 😉

PinkCotton:I think there was only 1 novel of that nature I was able to finish 😁😁😁 so I guess I can read them... but I wouldn't know how to start writing one... maybe I'll challenge myself to try in the future 😁

6yr

Autumn_CloudLv6

Ok. Am adding this book to the library because Caitlin Matthews recommended it! 😆

5yr

Autumn_CloudLv6

Ok. Am adding this book to the library because Caitlin Matthews recommended it! 😆

5yr

J_AndersonLv2

I rlly liked the story as well even if I also couldn't relate to the characters much but some times it's good to read things out of ur comfort zone.

5yr

dollychiplunkarLv12

hmm; m...

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Jack_Morgan_5668Lv1

Hello sunshine

4yr

Jack_Morgan_5668Lv1

Hello

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Why did it have to end with Jen and lucas getting married I really expect for them to tell everyone that they are expecting a baby and experience the joy of Hellen and Diane and we don't even know if Alex and Michael relationship will progress please author add more chapters

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