Zero-effort story. Complete rubbish writing. No attempt at even properly formatting or making it readable after 95+ chapters of nonsense. Characters are incredibly unrealistic and their behavior makes no sense for anyone who's made the journey out of their parents' doorway. Story is only at the top of Fanfics list because of spam reviews and stones. A perfect example of how garbage can be elevated and presented as something worth caring about in a broken system like Webnovel's. Complete waste of time for everyone involved.
Leixein
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LIKEAre you really coming in here 11 months after my review to proudly show off your terrible standards? I checked a few chapters because of your comment and everything is still the same. Enjoy what you like, but accept reality: this is garbage, both formatting and content.
Fellbane:Did we read the same story? I am not convinced you read what I read after seeing your review
Nah i just knew that based on your review i could get a rise out of you no matter how long it had been so thanks for giving me a chuckle. Also a little bit of advice, dont take harem collecting fanfics based on DxD seriously and expect them to be masterpieces
Wallabalooza:Are you really coming in here 11 months after my review to proudly show off your terrible standards? I checked a few chapters because of your comment and everything is still the same. Enjoy what you like, but accept reality: this is garbage, both formatting and content.
guyz i was only pretending to be rétarded lulz!11!!1 No one's asking for a masterpiece, just for the basics to be in order so it's readable. You're a móron.
Fellbane:Nah i just knew that based on your review i could get a rise out of you no matter how long it had been so thanks for giving me a chuckle. Also a little bit of advice, dont take harem collecting fanfics based on DxD seriously and expect them to be masterpieces
Wallabalooza:guyz i was only pretending to be rétarded lulz!11!!1 No one's asking for a masterpiece, just for the basics to be in order so it's readable. You're a móron.
Yeah, I agree but it doesn't matter how long it was up, you put it there and it doesn't matter if someone comments a year later or 3 minutes.
Wallabalooza:Are you really coming in here 11 months after my review to proudly show off your terrible standards? I checked a few chapters because of your comment and everything is still the same. Enjoy what you like, but accept reality: this is garbage, both formatting and content.
In general, I agree. You can read only out of despair or boredom. I myself have read up to chapter 94, I can’t go on, such nonsense. Too much unnecessary drama and inappropriate theatricality. And too stretched out. What could be done in 10 chapters stretched out to almost a hundred chapters. A lot of unnecessary words, unnecessary dialogues, in one word - water. Lots and lots of water.
Doesn't help that in the middle of the novel, a maturely and articulately crafted excerpt is put in from the reference that inspired the author. After that, the horrible writing and vocabulary is made apparent in full clarity. Despite this, I also respect, that despite horrible writing quality, the author actually completed what he set out to do, no matter how bad.
Literopat:In general, I agree. You can read only out of despair or boredom. I myself have read up to chapter 94, I can’t go on, such nonsense. Too much unnecessary drama and inappropriate theatricality. And too stretched out. What could be done in 10 chapters stretched out to almost a hundred chapters. A lot of unnecessary words, unnecessary dialogues, in one word - water. Lots and lots of water.