Review Detail of RageBlood in The Wish of the Dragon

If you can point out my problems that would be appreciated because im looking for mistakes so i can fix it cheers!

Yea love the new spin on this one revenge of the perv lol can't wait to read when those cheating b*tches get whats coming to them

What douse it mean by semi ntr

Full ntr is when the love interest abandon mc fully and have s3x with the new guy, but at this fanfic the girls still love mc but just forgot about him then after some time passed they regret and feeling guilty also no s3x done with the new guy...

Ele já voltou para o mundo dele ,pra realizar a vingança?

Can anyone suggest me similar dxd fanfic where he was betrayed by the girls.

That's hard. My suggestion is, why don't you go to Fanfiction. Net and try to filter for the popular dxd ff in there...

Read the change of the dragon, it’s were the autor of this fanfict as taken the start of the story, but is a undred time better... Also there is a small problem that there are only 11 chapters ‘cause the autor as some problems, but he hasn’t dropped and he’s making a awesome job, one of the best fanfict i have ever read.

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Good

please tell me you didn't name Rossweisse daughter as Othinus...

you should reply from leixein comments... not mine. -_-

Am I the only one who read this shit over and over again? It's a mother fucking master piece. Please can you write a season 2 or continue this for like 100+ chapters?

Can you please add screaning time for the others like Camilla , laurent, burst , silent , semiramis, xun er, jasmine and others from the primordial chaos world/ universe

.... you shouldn't reply to my comment bro -_- I'm not the author

so he will get all of them back including rias?

to the people who read this novel i wanna ask them a question will issei go back to rias, etc or just leaves them ??

he didn't go back to her. it's safe to read, don't worry