Review Detail of VladC in Starlight Life of the Sage

Realy nice grammar, like picture perfect. The story line is decent-good, I would`ve liked to have 'The Sage' be alone more than 10ish chapters, but that`s my personal oppinion. By the way, you should transfer the cultivation of the immortal way to the mana way.. I expect you to write like most of the story, like 2/3 in the mana world, so yeah... You could make Zara go away for a little.. Dao Protector makes the the story less interesting, it`s a good plot shield, but it`s a too good of one.. meh. Nice story overall, I hope you keep your releases steady. Keep it goin` !