Great writing, great elaboration, great pacing. And I like the interactions between the MC and the world around her. Especially the part where she tries and figures out the world laws around. The MC’s decisions make her a prudent and cautious person which I like personally. The only issue I have is that Zara seems to make it too easily into the MC’s world. Sure the other disciples suffered a backlash, but aside from that it was too smooth. I thought it would be much more interesting if the MC had another... maybe 10-20 chapters of exploring the new world. It’s still great though, and if future chapters are as good, I would really recommend others to read it.
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