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My review is not typical, I wrote what I thought after reading several chapters. Sinoptis, fascinates the reader. Definitely in the novel there is some kind of mystery, intrigue ?! Since now is the 21st century, the reader has a large store of knowledge of different stories, so you can build hypotheses and sentences, who is this protagonist? He is not what they say he is? And what do they consider him? Involuntarily want to know about it. And here I, the reader, am going to read the first chapter. First chapter. It amazes from the very beginning with a detailed description of the rain, tells the philosophy of falling water, is written very vividly and figuratively.In the epoch of visualization - the images in the novel sparkle with different faces! Very beautiful and spectacular images turned out! Yeah ... A world of fantasy, ambition, desire, they all stumble upon a gray reality and as a rule break into small pieces. Sometimes they manage to gather to dream again. Every schoolboy wants to go on a trip someday, to visit several countries. In reality, this becomes possible in 5-10 years ... miracles happen, but you need not to miss your chance, get on that train, get on that car to realize your dream. But in real life, the train can easily get off the rails and rush into the abyss without a bottom ... Not everyone manages to survive and then get out of the abyss ... after that, the survivors have no ambitions, no desire to enter the world of fantasy ... They understand that the experience is far away not universal, that fantasy is another world, but reality is harsh. But without a dream, life becomes gray. The path of enlightenment is hard, but if you find it, life begins to play with bright colors. In the course of the author was able to reflect in the first chapter. Of the benefits - an amazing figurative thinking, building a colorful world, understanding of human psychology. Of the minuses - too detailed descriptions, there is no action, it hey appear a little later, a little later, the reader needs a little patience. We go further to the second chapter. Description of the forest, very detailed, as if you turn on the zoom mode, go to macro photography of objects. They are presented in the smallest detail, you can see how the cells work! You can even hear what these cells are thinking ?! It's fantastic! However, after reading historical dry reports, reading ancient road builders, I want action without water! It is in the novel available, but very slowly begins to gain momentum. Probably this is the author's idea? Read on for now! And here at the end of the chapter we see this action and it is interrupted at the most interesting! The intrigue is laid, what will happen next? And this is an interesting turn of events! A person finds himself for the first time in another world and not yet started living in this world can be easily eaten by a bear! Original start! Indeed, in other novels, a person falling into another world, immediately gets cheater effects, strength, mind. Money, opportunities to become a wealthy person from scratch. But try to survive in an environment unknown to him, without knowledge of the language, without knowledge of local traditions and rituals? For example in real world -at the beginning of the 19th century, one English colonel, who neglected the rituals in one Eastern country, and after suffering, hope for salvation, disappointment, was beheaded. This is a true story. And what would be in a fantasy world, where there are monsters, magic? Scary to think? But it seems I was distracted from the chapters. The author raised the topic of how a person without a super ability to survive in a new world! It is written fascinatingly, I continue to read! Alas ... the main character ... possessed magic ... poor bear, namesake ... he ran into the wizard ... no luck, poor bear! Hard trials have changed the character of the protagonist, described quite realistically. In the third chapter, the reader can learn about the rich inner world of the protagonist, his torment and torment. Becoming a new person. “She was optimistic and pessimistic; she was caring and indifferent; she was selfless and selfish; she was passionate and inadequate; she was sober; she was lost. ”so she was a human! People undergo tests, some of them having overcome them become better, stronger , others break. The main character was just a human, she did not break, but just wanted to move away from the problems. The main character’s aspirations for gaining an understanding of how life works are well described. Of course the magic power of the main character is cool! He can still fly through the air! Additional review will give only after reading the remaining chapters. But reading is fascinating and interesting, each new chapter turns out to be more exciting than the previous one. Respect to the author, a good novel turned out! ----- The stability of the update - the main thing seems to me to release a couple of chapters a week, but it is stable. Every day, it turns out not everyone can write, but even so that it is of high quality. So score 5 out of 5 stars. Story Development - the author has an unusual style, figurative thinking is well developed, deep detail, it seems at first that it is even deeper than it should. But after reading more chapters, comes the understanding that this is such a special style of the author. But I, as a reader, would like to see more activity, but this is only my vision, it is based on the fact that, like the protagonist of the novel, I have not read fiction for a long time, but read historical documents and books. Therefore, I would like to immediately move to the essence of history, facts, events, but in fiction a different approach. Evaluation if to be objective should be 5 out of 5. But even the reader can have a subjective evaluation, so 4 out of 5. Character Design: In my opinion, they turned out to be thoughtful, with a rich inner world, torments, reflections, while volitioning completely changes the main character. As if something had been removed from her seal restrictions. Volition turns out to be the "main leveling". The world was not fair, but when the Colt appeared, the world became just. So the magic has changed the main character. The rating is probably 5 out of 5 although there are certain questions, how did such a power appear? Due to suffering? Illnesses? But I liked the character design. World Background: It seems the world is described in more detail than was even required of it. Well, I wrote about this above, at the expense of macro filming. rating 5 out of 5. Writing Quality - The author knows English better than the reviewer, so I don’t undertake to rate., I’m not sure... probably 5 out of 5.
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“A sense of exploration flooded through her, and she breathed deeply in the invigorating air, the coolness in her chest quickly evaporated!” - unwittingly thought, and where is the feeling of the researcher? This is fury! The desire to get to the truth! Feverish gleam in his eyes, trembling hands like a hobbit who lost "his Precious"! The desire to work 24 hours a day! Do not sleep for 2-3 days! Dig, dig, deep and wide! Until you find the truth! The research process itself is more exciting than publishing the result! Relatively speaking, the search for precious crystals of knowledge in the mine, you need to dig tons of ore to find a pair of crystals! That's what research is! But probably, the literary heroine had a different rush! The world of fiction is well described, as if you see it in real time! The author managed to describe the world, very realistic! Who gives an assessment of human behavior? The man himself can not figure it out. If there is no basis. In the 20th century, these were the basic commandments of the 10 basic and about 100 additional. Without these commandments, a person has no basis, a point of reference, his inner conscience can make a mistake! Interestingly in this “one-determination” at the end of the chapter, the eternal philosophical questions of human existence are being raised! Curious!
about chapter - Illumination It is interesting in almost all the stories of moving to another world, the characters can never go back, except for the story - "Death March of Kara to Hadzhimaru Isekai Kyousukyoku". It's like a light bulb in your mouth. She can go and can not get out! Interestingly magic would be maintained if the magician fell asleep? In the Wizard of Earthsea, Ged said that if the magician had fallen asleep, the magic would have disappeared! Yes, and how to find in the land of iron deposits? If you do not know the search method? If not near the mountains? How to get metal from iron ore without having a melting furnace? To get steel, you need to add special additives for the strength of the metal, who would forge the metal? Many questions immediately appear here! Stone nails? Would they have sustained the weight of the main character? Since the structure of the stone would be broken, then you need to know the resistance of materials ... but is it another world? How to find out? This means that the magic system should give hints, a search engine, and an expert decision-making system. Otherwise it will not be reliable, IMHO. Cool! Such a system was! This greatly simplified the task of creating a house on the tree! Great! An interesting solution! What I like about systems is that they can anticipate common sense, they can be above it! And it's great! There would be a system to create a plant for the recognition of plants, is there any poison in them, allergens? A system that can translate - plants into fiber and from it into threads and then begin to spin fabric. After cutting, create a pattern and sew the right thing - a sheet, duvet cover, pillowcase, towel, curtain. And to recognize whether there are allergens, then you need to know a particular person. Apparently you need a drop of blood so that the system can conduct a rapid analysis? Create ink? It was possible to take advantage of the blood, the juice of the plants, find some fruits, bones, burn them, mix the resulting ash with oil (only it still needs to be obtained). Here is the ink. You can see online how ink was made in China or Japan in antiquity. And then there is another thought, on which the main character did not mentionwhat is she on write (what surface will he write on)?? It was necessary to create a paper! It could be a paper made of cotton, linen, wood. But you need to know the technology! There would be a system and could suggest a method, get some devices for manufacturing ... And what about the power, magical barrier? After all, who knows if there were in the forest besides bears, there were even more large snakes that could climb a tree? Poisonous spiders or other insects, mosquitoes ... that could still carry a viral infection. But the topic is really interesting, a lot of things you can think of a new ...
about chapter - Encounter In another world, knowledge of the world of the Earth, probably will not work? Since koasny and yellow color in the world of the Earth is the color of danger, and that there in the other world no one of the new arrivals knows! At the expense of a water source, who knows it in another world, is it suitable for a person in its chemical composition? And here comes the action ... probably the new chapters will be more eventful ...
Gourmet_DAO:about chapter - Illumination It is interesting in almost all the stories of moving to another world, the characters can never go back, except for the story - "Death March of Kara to Hadzhimaru Isekai Kyousukyoku". It's like a light bulb in your mouth. She can go and can not get out! Interestingly magic would be maintained if the magician fell asleep? In the Wizard of Earthsea, Ged said that if the magician had fallen asleep, the magic would have disappeared! Yes, and how to find in the land of iron deposits? If you do not know the search method? If not near the mountains? How to get metal from iron ore without having a melting furnace? To get steel, you need to add special additives for the strength of the metal, who would forge the metal? Many questions immediately appear here! Stone nails? Would they have sustained the weight of the main character? Since the structure of the stone would be broken, then you need to know the resistance of materials ... but is it another world? How to find out? This means that the magic system should give hints, a search engine, and an expert decision-making system. Otherwise it will not be reliable, IMHO. Cool! Such a system was! This greatly simplified the task of creating a house on the tree! Great! An interesting solution! What I like about systems is that they can anticipate common sense, they can be above it! And it's great! There would be a system to create a plant for the recognition of plants, is there any poison in them, allergens? A system that can translate - plants into fiber and from it into threads and then begin to spin fabric. After cutting, create a pattern and sew the right thing - a sheet, duvet cover, pillowcase, towel, curtain. And to recognize whether there are allergens, then you need to know a particular person. Apparently you need a drop of blood so that the system can conduct a rapid analysis? Create ink? It was possible to take advantage of the blood, the juice of the plants, find some fruits, bones, burn them, mix the resulting ash with oil (only it still needs to be obtained). Here is the ink. You can see online how ink was made in China or Japan in antiquity. And then there is another thought, on which the main character did not mentionwhat is she on write (what surface will he write on)?? It was necessary to create a paper! It could be a paper made of cotton, linen, wood. But you need to know the technology! There would be a system and could suggest a method, get some devices for manufacturing ... And what about the power, magical barrier? After all, who knows if there were in the forest besides bears, there were even more large snakes that could climb a tree? Poisonous spiders or other insects, mosquitoes ... that could still carry a viral infection. But the topic is really interesting, a lot of things you can think of a new ...
about chapter - Companion I am curious and was it a male Fox? Because then talk about "Essairyn wondered just what was the story behind the man’s words from earlier" . In fact, this is a parallel world, or the world of nirvana! A journey through the world of mental essence, which was described in integral yoga, Chan Buddhism and Castaneda .... curious ... And the great gray predominates in a world where light and darkness shifts.
Gourmet_DAO:about chapter - Encounter In another world, knowledge of the world of the Earth, probably will not work? Since koasny and yellow color in the world of the Earth is the color of danger, and that there in the other world no one of the new arrivals knows! At the expense of a water source, who knows it in another world, is it suitable for a person in its chemical composition? And here comes the action ... probably the new chapters will be more eventful ...
about chapter - The Mirror World The common sense of the Earth in the new world may be just a heresy! Ahahahahahahahahaha !!!! No germs, no mosquitoes, no bacteria! How evil! Then we need some kind of drugs like immunostimulants to support the magic powers ... The author created a curious world! Intriguing! Spirits - earth, fire, wind, water, wood, fire ... "" Well, "she began, peering out the window again," I will believe my feelings, which indicate that you are human. So, I would like to tell you more, but do you have more food here or something? still hungry. " - there is also humor that adorns this chapter!
Gourmet_DAO:“A sense of exploration flooded through her, and she breathed deeply in the invigorating air, the coolness in her chest quickly evaporated!” - unwittingly thought, and where is the feeling of the researcher? This is fury! The desire to get to the truth! Feverish gleam in his eyes, trembling hands like a hobbit who lost "his Precious"! The desire to work 24 hours a day! Do not sleep for 2-3 days! Dig, dig, deep and wide! Until you find the truth! The research process itself is more exciting than publishing the result! Relatively speaking, the search for precious crystals of knowledge in the mine, you need to dig tons of ore to find a pair of crystals! That's what research is! But probably, the literary heroine had a different rush! The world of fiction is well described, as if you see it in real time! The author managed to describe the world, very realistic! Who gives an assessment of human behavior? The man himself can not figure it out. If there is no basis. In the 20th century, these were the basic commandments of the 10 basic and about 100 additional. Without these commandments, a person has no basis, a point of reference, his inner conscience can make a mistake! Interestingly in this “one-determination” at the end of the chapter, the eternal philosophical questions of human existence are being raised! Curious!
Chapter Guardians I wonder if the fox never talked to travelers, how did he know so much about them? Was there any publicly accessible database of all species in this fantasy world? How did Fox know the information about the Earth? Interestingly, did the grazing animals also have a mind and could they talk were other people who were over-ridden, demons or spirits? Bow and arrows? Why not a gun? Blaster? Death ray? Can you even shoot a finger, the magic? If there is magic then let it be 100 percent! But for some reason in the novels, she needs to be updated, probably the idea came from the games? But in the novel "Death March kara Hajimaru Isekai Kyousoukyoku" there is 300 percent magic! It is interesting! Although, of course, each author has his own idea, his own magic, his own preferences about pumping magic ... On the other hand, the author can immediately make the magic of the main character omnipotent in his new world ... Strange act of the protagonist! Recently, she killed two demons, in cold blood, but then after killing an animal, she began to suffer from remorse .... a special lover of such delicacies ... Thank you for the interesting chapter ... I’ll continue reading tomorrow!
Chapter - Nightmarish Chauffeur I wonder who is hiding in the light? Even more dangerous creatures? Politeness allows you to do without unnecessary conflicts and broken noses. Although on other worlds, politeness can be interpreted as a slur ?! Wow, that means in the world of magic everything depends on the nature of the soul of the being? Can it be good or evil? Regardless of affiliation to a particular species? The kind of spirits - the kind of good, the kind of demons - kind of evil. It is interesting and to whom can be attributed a person? There are evil, there are good? Does everything mean havisis from the heart? But do spirits or demons have souls? These are another philosophical questions.
Chapter - The Andelrins Interestingly in the other world, people are not so cautious that they take as a companion an unknown person with an unknown spirit. Either they are very strong, either influential or kind. But on the other hand, the father of the family should be careful about strangers. Such an interesting world!
Chapter - Healer Great, the magic of the main character acts as a 3D medical printer restoring damaged tissues, bones and vessels of the human body. Unexpected move! For the first time I read how healing magic works! Wow, author! Chona probably regretted showing her kindness, if not for her carelessness, her family was not attacked. The human heart is so weak! Yet Chona was strong in spirit! This makes me happy!
Chapter -| The New Earth So there are dark and gray magicians? Gandalf where are u? Then the question is what magic there is in this new world? Interestingly, for some reason, in all the stories, there are schools, academies, and how a person gets into them, so problems begin. It is as if all these educational institutions are the shelters of the special services of the country, and in schools they are recruiting new spies ... We need to run away from all these schools ... as the story usually begins to become more boring ... everything goes on a bad end ... Assessment of abilities, endless tournaments ... student confrontation ... hidden enemies ... I hope this novel can avoid this cliché!
Chapter - Darren Interestingly, only students of colleges, universities and schoolchildren get into this world? People from different geographic places can still recognize in themselves similar, Earthlings, because something in the world is the same, but something different! English unites all ?! Ahahahahahaha !!! Or global values? Knowledge of philosophy, Greek, Roman, Persian, European poetry, prose! Entechneyn, Fermi, Newton, Pushkin, Tolstoy, Mark Twain! An interesting chapter!
Chapter- Cyrienne "There is a whole ecosystem, economy, physics and history." - only the rules are completely different, and laws, and methods, and values ... this is how to move from one social system to another ... It is always a shock, a ruin, one who can quickly adapt to a changed environment. But what about the principles? Some refuse them, others do not.
Chapter - Timeless This is a common practice, foreigners are often deceived, for money. Especially taxi drivers ... the price from Beijing to City Airport should have been 70 yuan and from the United States from the USA they took 300! drove for 100 but in a limousine))) In India, from New Delhi airport, the fare was 80 rupees but brought up for 260 ... we have to travel 80 cent for foreigners from the airport to the city center for local people (depending on the honesty of the taxi driver ) from 3 to 10 dollars!