Review Detail of Pasteme in Reincarnated Into The Apocalypse Of An Alternate World
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Okay, here we go. Your entry was a bit of track but you got back into the story when he went back in time. I saw u tried to add a bit of pink atmosphere with him noticing things only the bent will. But the best friend character still needs more of a personality fill in. I mean is he dominant, timid ,etc. I need this expressed in him every action. Well i can't wait for your updates
Reincarnated Into The Apocalypse Of An Alternate World
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I disagree I think more and more of the characters' dispositions will be revealed as time goes on, as is natural and this is why we want to get to know them. In reality, there is so much more depth to a person than simply being dominant in a pairing, or timid, especially as people change and grow during hard times